Jumble!

Referring back to the idea that my trailer is not 'jumbled up' enough, I have decided to mix it up a little more. For example there are two consecutive scenes which are more or less the same. Therefore, naturally, I need to split them up. These scenes are the more mellow and calm of the trailer and bearing in mind that I want a calming scene right at the end before the climax, I have decided to move the second of these scenes to here.

I also feel as though the scene where my 'scary' character is in the dark and the black screen flashes and she appears again is quite a strong point of my trailer and I feel as though it should go nearer towards the end. This is because horror film trailers conventionally get more scary/have stronger scenes towards the end of their trailers.

Now that I have moved this scene I feel as though the beginning of my film is too slow. Therefore I have decided to add another moderately fast scene in (the stair scene) into the beginning so that there is more than just the bedroom scene.

I have also made some last little changes that I thought were necessary to the order of the scenes. This was the outcome.