Teacher Feedback

After finishing the first draft of my trailer, I asked my teacher to take a look and give me feedback. She told me that there were a few improvements that I could make.

•  She said that it was unclear whether or not my piece was a trailer or not, she suggested putting in a voice over to make this more clear
• I needed more text such as the actors' names etc
• The scene in the kitchen needed more clarity because it seemed unprofessional in comparison to the rest of the trailer